Talk:Ryoga Hibiki

Does anyone else get a feeling of this page being some of a pro-Ryoga essay/rant? I've tried not to be judgmental, but the page does feel kind of biased on every reading. I have no idea if this is an accurate conception, so I leave that to the more experienced character entry writers to determine and, if neccessary, correct.

That said, there are definately areas that do feel awkwardly long-winded (these also tend to feel the more strongly biased) and which could really do with editing. For example, would not this fit the "sub-paragraph" of the Shi Shi Hokodan much better then what is currently there?

"Because the Shishi Hokodan is depicted as being more powerful when the user is more intensely depressed and weaker when they are less depressed, as well as the instruction scroll proclaiming that "anyone can do it", there is a school of thought that the technique's power stems entirely from the user's emotional state, rather then their own power."

Finally, I thought it was the policy of this wiki that measurements should not be used unless they are officially mentioned in the series itself? Thusly, while it is valid to note Ranma being able to punch Mikado 501 (dubbed anime) or 518 (subbed anime, manga) times during his time in the "Dance of Death" technique, it is not valid to note just how heavy the boulders, etc, Ryoga, Ranma and others have thrown must have been, as such measurements are derived entirely from fan extrapolation and they are thusly fanon? If I am correctly informed, then shouldn't these mentions of weights be removed from this article? Ranime Codexer 17:26, June 15, 2011 (UTC)Ranime Codexer